Hello....
Arrrr .... This is my first time to writing Diary in English. I never do like this before.
Becouse now I want to up my English to good skill spoken and writen English.
So long time I practise by myself , from movie , from music and from anything I can do.
But it's not work.
I know just easy word. I can not writing true Grammar But onething special I have skill to listening and understand. I don't know why.
I think becouse music. I start to listen inter music since I'am 11 year old and never listen Thai song anymore.
I use to exam Toeic in two year ago.
Before I never know anything about Toeic. I don't know how to exam or where is the place to exam.
But when I get total point. My mom laugh me. my grammar total is 75 point but mylistening is 230 point.
I think my problem is Grammar. If I try I think I can do.
Now I want to everyone come to see my Diary.
Please, comment something about my English. Everyone can be my teacher.
If I can not exam to be a Pilot. But I think I have good English better then now.
Thank you for every sight to read. And so special thank to every comment krub.
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to me,ur writing is quite fair.
however, u'll have to improve some grammar and structure.
one good thing i see from the entry is, u can express the content u wanna say.it's very useful in real time communication.
it's a good idea to study english from flicks and musics, cos i started mine from them too.
However, in order to go for a pilot exam, i would advise u to buy some english grammar books, and get something outta it. ur english will be much more improved then ;)
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Help with grammar. If you don't like to see me fixing your English again in the future, just say so.
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Hello....
Arrrr .... This is my first time to writing Diary in English. I never do like this before. -> This is my first time to write Diary in English. I never do this before.
Becouse now I want to up my English to good skill spoken and writen English. -> The reason is that I want to improve my written and spoken English skill
So long time I practise by myself , from movie , from music and from anything I can do. -> For quite sometimes (a long time), I have been practicing by myself, watching movies, listening music, etc..
But it's not work. -> But it doesn't (seem to) work.
I know just easy word. -> I know only simple words.
I can not writing true Grammar -> I cannot use grammar correctly.
But onething special I have skill to listening and understand. I don't know why. -> My listening skill is pretty good though. I don't know why.
I think becouse music. -> Maybe because of music.
I start to listen inter music since I'am 11 year old and never listen Thai song anymore. -> I started to listen to inter music since I was 11 years old, etc..
I use to exam Toeic in two year ago. -> I also took Toeic exam two years ago.
Before I never know anything about Toeic. I don't know how to exam or where is the place to exam. -> Prior to the exam, I didn't know anything about Toeic. I had no clue about how or where the exam took place.
But when I get total point. My mom laugh me. my grammar total is 75 point but mylistening is 230 point. -> When I finally got my results, my mom laugh at me because I got 75 points from grammar and 230 points for listening.
I think my problem is Grammar. If I try I think I can do. -> I think my problem is with grammar. (Use small 'g').
Now I want to everyone come to see my Diary.
Please, comment something about my English. Everyone can be my teacher. -> Now I want everyone to read my diary. Please make a comment about my English.
If I can not exam to be a Pilot. But I think I have good English better then now. -> If I can't pass the exam to be a pilot, at least my English will get better.
Thank you for every sight to read. And so special thank to every comment krub. -> Thank you for reading. Especially, thank you for every comment.
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Your written English is understandable but is not good enough to pass any writing exam. Dont' feel bad because I fix every sentence. Practice makes perfect. I am still learning English myself (been 20 years and still not perfect.).
I'm happy to pop in to read and help fixing it from time to time. You just have to notice the way you use 'words' in sentences.
Words have their functions; you dont' mess them. So you do need a good grammar book to begin with. Check out how to use each type of words correctly. Don't use capital if not necessary.
Thank you for every comment krub ^_^
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